Wednesday, July 31, 2019

Setting description


The tropical paradise looked idyllic and inviting . It was a blazing and scorching  day. The island was remote and free from people. The clouds looked like cotton candy in sitting in a candy shop. The island was very quiet and peaceful.The sun's rays were reflecting off the water like a mirror reflecting an image.Fish on the sea shore smelled like rotten eggs. People were tanning like a toaster slightly burning bread. Other people were relaxing under umbrellas drinking delectable,ice- cold drinks. There were mountains of greenery just behind the sand that looked like broccoli. The water felt like fizzing lemonade.


 The sand tickles people's  feet and they start giggling with laughter. The water feels as thick as molasses, yet slipperier than ice. The  sand felt soft and grainy on people's feet. The tree trunks were rough and pokey. Because of the suns rays the umbrellas looked torn. From the inside  the log was as smooth as a table top and from the inside it was hard. When people walk the sand crunch. Water is swaying gently in the water as it is overlapping the sand. You can  also hear the seagulls loudly chirping on the treetops. The taste of the water is salty.

Overall this amazing paradise was an exquisite, mesmerising and  a fun place to be. This place had lots of things to do: fishing,swimming, relaxing in the sand,play in the sand and sunbathe. This place was  the best!

1 comment:

  1. I liked how you used lots of iunteresting vocabulary and similes. Next time try and space your paragraphs a bit more.

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